Brainiacs is a year 5 & 6 class at Ngatea Primary School . Our teacher is Mrs Barker, here you can look at our learning and work.
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Writing!

The story of a Fisherman

Once upon a time, there was a fisherman called Tricky Trent. He lived in a small house near a river with his family. One day the fisherman was bored and he decided to go fishing in the Piako river. He gathered all his stuff up and headed down to the river, when he got there he put all his stuff down and set out his line and waited and waited. The fish didn’t bite, hour after hour he waited. Tricky Trent was desperate to take some fish home to his family and it didn’t look like there was any fish in the river to be caught that day.

Tricky Trent got an idea to drive to the bank and get money out so he could buy some fish and chips for his family. When he got there, he discovered he had no money.

Tricky Trent was a quick thinker. He yelled “Quick, thief “ all of the bank tellers lay down on the floor. While they lay on the floor Tricky Trent grabbed a handful of 20 dollar notes, then he ran for the door but then he tripped on a chair leg.

The bank manager looked up from her desk and saw all her workers lying on the floor, she picked up her iphone 6 and yelled in it “Robber at work”. Within 1 minute, Superhero Racy Rebekah arrived in the bank. She saw Tricky Tent on the ground with the money. When Superhero Racy Rebekah was not looking she  tripped up on Tricky Trent and was hurt.  She then got her fancy phone out  and called Doctor Navdeep. Doctor Navdeep came in a flash.  
“What’s is the problem?” said the Doctor Navdeep to Superhero Racy Rebekah.
“Can’t  you see Doctor? I think my arm is broken.” she replied.
Doctor Navdeep then asked Tricky Trent “What are you doing?”
He said, “I was borrowing money so I could go and get some fish and chips for my family because I am a useless fisherman.”
Doctor Navdeep checked them and called for an ambulance to take them to the nearest hospital. Sadly Tricky Trent was arrested later that day for not catching any fish and borrowing money from the bank without asking.
by Navdeep, Rebekah and Trent


 


   

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